A couple of questions, I hope you'll respond.
As for the review part, firstly, i guess it wasn't bad. I liked the music, but, as you mention in your comment, the animation is kind of lacking, what with images just passing by the screen and everything. I certainly don't mind the style though, which leads me to the questions:
This reminds me a lot of the intro to the Cowboy Bebop series, were you influenced by that show?
And secondly, did you create the music as well? If you did, please post it in the audio portal and link it in your comment for the movie. Or, if you did not, please provide proper credit to the artist by putting the name up in the comments or as co-author or whatever, not only because i'd like to look in to their work, but because the music is such a major part of the video and all.
Or maybe this is all from some series that I just haven't heard of or whatever, in which case, can you provide that information as well.
Anyway, good movie, as it were, maybe you could make episodes with those characters in the future, just a suggestion.